Hope

Saturday, July 28, 2012 Vishaal 2 Comments

Hope
Exultant Enthusiastic
Entertain Harbor Indulge
Exempt from distrust  Exempt from distrust, reassuring

Promise

This Cinquain Sequence is written in an attempt to learn poetry along with fellow enthusiasts.

A Cinquain Sequence is as follows -

Line 1- 1 Noun
Line 2- 2 Adjectives related to 1
Line 3- 3 Action Verbs related to 1
Line 4- 4 Feelings-a full sentence
Line 5- 1 Synonym or a word that sums it all up.

2 comments :

  1. PRIYANKA DEYSaturday, July 28, 2012 8:40:00 PM

    Very well done!
    Just that

    -harbour is not an action verb
    -the fourth line has to have 4 words not 3.. :)
    except that! well done!

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    1. VishaalSaturday, July 28, 2012 8:55:00 PM

      Ah! Okay. But Harbor is a verb ... you harbor feelings. 4th line, yes.. that needs to be changed :)

      Thank you!

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